newengland.191.d
Per the constitution, the federal government may only govern interstate commerce, not commerce that is done within one state.
Should be 'As per the constitution,~'
The UCC would establish universal contract principles as agreed on my legal scholars, and then would be adopted by each of the several states which would make contract law predictable and consistent across the country.
Shouldn't 'my' be 'many'?
newengland.312.d.isindependent
Let’s inform [OVERLORD.GetName] what the best course of action should be.
If the country is independent, there should be no overlord
newengland.316.d
The Organisation of American States will emphasise trade and closer ties to Washington while the strength of the [NEE.GetName] guarantees our independence.
Capital could be something else than 'Washington', changing to [NEE.Capital.GetCapitalVictoryPointName] seems better
newengland.72.d
Prominent politicians like Theodore Green have been vehemont about an expansion of the navy and army in spite of the overwhelmingly isolationist stance of much of New England.
'vehement' misspelled as 'vehemont'
newengland.328.d1
While they will now split to their antebellum period countries, they will undoubtedly appreciate the fact that now they are placed under the protection and care of [NEE.GetNameDef] .
Unnecessary space between '[NEE.GetNameDef] .'
NEE_henry_morgenthau_jr_desc
Studying agriculture, Morgenthau joined the Federal Farm Bureau, and attempted to formulate policies with economists on how best to reduce inflation.
'Federal Farm Bureau' should be 'Federal Farm Board' (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Henry_Morgenthau_Jr.#Political_career / New Deal / first paragraph first sentence)
NEE_frances_perkins_desc
Perkins advocates for the governemnt to keep its promises to workers, and implement a minimum wage and unemployment insurance program.
typo in governemnt
newengland.335.d
They have approached our government with a simple request - dissolve our current socialist government and replace it with one aligned with Washington’s interests.
Capital could be something else than 'Washington', changing to [NEE.Capital.GetCapitalVictoryPointName] seems better
newengland.336.d2
To fully expel the socialist threat from our hemisphere and protect our citizens, we will have to resort to a full military intervention to restore democracy in [FROM.GetNameDef]
No period in the end
newengland.347.d
newengland.348.d
Both events fire for Great Britain and National France respectively, but the event descriptions seem to be written in the New Englander perspective.
newengland.348.t
Repaying an Old Debt
This is an event for National France, so they are the ones getting an old debt 'repaid'. The title seems to be written in the New Englander perspective.
newengland.350.d
We will have to present ourselves as not conquerors and liberators but as fellwow countrymen aware of our nation's plight.
typo in 'fellwow'.
As we struggle to rebuild the our government from decades of communard impurity, we will need all the help we can get.
This event also fires for Great Britain, so using adjective something else than 'communard' seems reasonable
newengland.191.d Per the constitution, the federal government may only govern interstate commerce, not commerce that is done within one state. Should be 'As per the constitution,~'
The UCC would establish universal contract principles as agreed on my legal scholars, and then would be adopted by each of the several states which would make contract law predictable and consistent across the country. Shouldn't 'my' be 'many'?
newengland.312.d.isindependent Let’s inform [OVERLORD.GetName] what the best course of action should be. If the country is independent, there should be no overlord
newengland.316.d The Organisation of American States will emphasise trade and closer ties to Washington while the strength of the [NEE.GetName] guarantees our independence. Capital could be something else than 'Washington', changing to [NEE.Capital.GetCapitalVictoryPointName] seems better
newengland.72.d Prominent politicians like Theodore Green have been vehemont about an expansion of the navy and army in spite of the overwhelmingly isolationist stance of much of New England. 'vehement' misspelled as 'vehemont'
newengland.328.d1 While they will now split to their antebellum period countries, they will undoubtedly appreciate the fact that now they are placed under the protection and care of [NEE.GetNameDef] . Unnecessary space between '[NEE.GetNameDef] .'
NEE_henry_morgenthau_jr_desc Studying agriculture, Morgenthau joined the Federal Farm Bureau, and attempted to formulate policies with economists on how best to reduce inflation. 'Federal Farm Bureau' should be 'Federal Farm Board' (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Henry_Morgenthau_Jr.#Political_career / New Deal / first paragraph first sentence)
NEE_frances_perkins_desc Perkins advocates for the governemnt to keep its promises to workers, and implement a minimum wage and unemployment insurance program. typo in governemnt
newengland.335.d They have approached our government with a simple request - dissolve our current socialist government and replace it with one aligned with Washington’s interests. Capital could be something else than 'Washington', changing to [NEE.Capital.GetCapitalVictoryPointName] seems better
newengland.336.d2 To fully expel the socialist threat from our hemisphere and protect our citizens, we will have to resort to a full military intervention to restore democracy in [FROM.GetNameDef] No period in the end
newengland.347.d newengland.348.d Both events fire for Great Britain and National France respectively, but the event descriptions seem to be written in the New Englander perspective.
newengland.348.t Repaying an Old Debt This is an event for National France, so they are the ones getting an old debt 'repaid'. The title seems to be written in the New Englander perspective.
newengland.350.d We will have to present ourselves as not conquerors and liberators but as fellwow countrymen aware of our nation's plight. typo in 'fellwow'. As we struggle to rebuild the our government from decades of communard impurity, we will need all the help we can get. This event also fires for Great Britain, so using adjective something else than 'communard' seems reasonable