[ ] 0:17:43.04: (As the script note suggests, just make up puns. Vale has TLs for them in the TL notes)
0:21:43.53:
[ ] みかん: Mandarin
[ ] と: Ⓟ
This is a shogi piece, specifically a promoted pawn. Other non-pawns follow behind it. I would leave all of them untranslated since even Western players play with the Japanese characters.
08 TS
10000
is already written in the corner.09 TS
Lines marked with
TL
in the Actor field. The TL for these screens are incomplete. I can try to TL more if we're actually going to do them.10 TS