KatieP
commented
9 years ago Too long paragraph on autumn image on animation.
Photos used in animation on last white page ( 5 small circles) would look better if more consistent type of image, if they match.
Darken lighter parts of ocean image because is hard to read against white text.
Couldn't tell ocean image in animation was the ocean. Typo in smoke stack text Music too heavy at the end Animation a little too long Symbiosis feels like a too big a word Facts go by too fast on landfill slide Pause button does not pause audio!