Spelling Mistakes || Grammatical Mistakes || Capitalization Require.

[Amartya-Mahato]

🙂🙂Hi, I am a beginner and there are some Spelling and Grammatical Mistakes that I have encountered while reading the Documentation, I would like to point them out

I will also attach a link of the mistake's closest point so that it will be easier to find them immediately 😅😅

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1. Spelling Mistakes

• Should be within in place of whithin Below 2.10.5

whithin -> within
- Shipping snapshots whithin LINSTOR
+ Shipping snapshots within LINSTOR 

• Should be service in place of srvice Exact 8.3.6

srvice -> service
- Checking the compute srvice logs
+ Checking the compute service logs

• Should be initialized in place of iniitialized in that paragraph. In 10.1

iniitialized -> initialized
- LINSTOR Gateway requires an iniitialized LINSTOR Cluster, DRBD Reactor,
+ LINSTOR Gateway requires an initialized LINSTOR Cluster, DRBD Reactor, 

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2. Grammatical Mistakes

• There is an Extraneous apostrophe in paragraph's first word Node's instead we can use Nodes Below 1.1.2

Node's -> Nodes
- Node’s are a server or container that participate
+ Nodes are a server or container that participate

• There is a grammatical mistake here we can remove extra has from this line Below 1.1.2 In Resources

has now has  -> has now
- LINSTOR has now has expanded its capabilities to manage a broader
+ LINSTOR has now expanded its capabilities to manage a broader

• In Paragraph of 1.5 Upgrading In line no. 8 there is a typo we should be using Then instead Than In 1.5

than -> then
- than it is recommended to report the error to LINBIT
+ then it is recommended to report the error to LINBIT

• In 1.13 Creating and deploying resources/volumes inside that important paragraph there is an article mistake In 1.13

with an  -> with a
- Despite of that the size can be increased even with an deployed resource
+ Despite of that the size can be increased even with a deployed resource

• There is a comma missing in first paragraph of 11.0 LINSTOR EXOS Integration In 11.0

drive  -> drive,
- LINSTOR like a local drive but this would
+ LINSTOR like a local drive, but this would

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3. Capitalization Require

• We can dowhereas into Whereas it would look more better in my opinion, it is right above of important paragraphs Below 1.13.2

whereas -> Whereas
- whereas the strategy-names are listed above
+ Whereas the strategy-names are listed above

• In last Paragraph of 2.1.1 Highly-available Storage we can use Copy instead of copy Last of 2.1.1

copy -> Copy
- copy the /etc/systemd/system/var-lib-linstor.mount
+ Copy the /etc/systemd/system/var-lib-linstor.mount

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Posting regarding issue #273

[Amartya-Mahato]

@ghernadi kindly add label SODACODELOW and SODACODE2022

[Amartya-Mahato]

Hi @ghernadi I wanted to work on this issue, is there any way i can help?

[shelar1423]

@ghernadi kindly assign me this issue

[Amartya-Mahato]

@yusufyildiz thanks for assigning me, Please guide me how can i help with this issue.

[shelar1423]

@Amartya-Mahato do you mind if I do this and you can take up some other issue?

[Amartya-Mahato]

@shelar1423 i am not sure if we can help brother.

[yusufyildiz]

@Amartya-Mahato please send your request to https://github.com/LINBIT/linbit-documentation/tree/master/UG9/en

We'll check and approve your issue.

[yusufyildiz]

Approved & accepted. you have the point @Amartya-Mahato

[Amartya-Mahato]

@yusufyildiz thanks sir!

[yusufyildiz]

SODACODE-issue-Accepted #sodacode2022

[yusufyildiz]

SODACODE-PR-ACCEPTED

[rp-]

@yusufyildiz can this be closed?