Tenison
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2 years ago Please add label SODACODELOW and SODACODE2022
Open Tenison opened 2 years ago
Tenison
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2 years ago Please add label SODACODELOW and SODACODE2022
Tenison
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2 years ago I would also like to work on this issue if it is accepted.
anvithks
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2 years ago @yusufyildiz PTAL
Tenison
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2 years ago Please can you help me point out some of the things I should be looking at?
@yusufyildiz PTAL
yusufyildiz
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2 years ago @anvithks @Tenison #SODACODE-issue-Accepted #sodacode2022 Thank you! awesome contribution.
yusufyildiz
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2 years ago @Tenison you can work on the issue if you like here: https://github.com/LINBIT/linbit-documentation/tree/master/UG9/en then we'll check and merge.
Tenison
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2 years ago Thanks a lot. I will revert if I need any assistance
yusufyildiz
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2 years ago 
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2 years ago @yusufyildiz close?
Hi, Read through the docs chapter one and found some corrections. I would like to point them out.
should be help in place of serve @ Intro
This guide is intended to serve users of the software-defined storage (SDS) solution LINSTOR® as a definitive reference guide and handbook.
This guide is intended to help users of the software-defined storage (SDS) solution LINSTOR® as a definitive reference guide and handbook.
should be into in place of in Basic administrative tasks / Setup
Basic administrative tasks / Setup deals with LINSTOR’s basic functionality and gives you an insight in using common administrative tasks
Basic administrative tasks / Setup deals with LINSTOR’s basic functionality and gives you an insight into using common administrative tasks
should be from that, in place of of that @ Basic administrative tasks / Setup
Apart of that you can use this chapter as a step-by-step instruction guide to deploy LINSTOR in its basic setup.
Apart from that, you can use this chapter as a step-by-step instruction guide to deploy LINSTOR in its basic setup.
Add , to tasks @ Further LINSTOR tasks section
In Further LINSTOR tasks a variety of advanced and important LINSTOR tasks as well as configurations ...
In Further LINSTOR tasks, a variety of advanced and important LINSTOR tasks as well as configurations
should be are servers or containers instead of are a server or container @ Nodes
Nodes are a server or container that participate in a LINSTOR cluster.
Nodes are servers or containers that participate in a LINSTOR cluster.
should be profiles or templates in place of profile or template @ Definitions
Definitions define attributes of an object, they can be thought of as profile or template
Definitions define attributes of an object, they can be thought of as profiles or templates
Replace prior to with before @ Definitions. Makes this section easy to understand
A definition must be defined prior to creating the associated object
A definition must be defined before creating the associated object
For example; you must create a ResourceDefinition prior to creating the Resource
For example; you must create a ResourceDefinition before creating the Resource
Add , to for example @ Volume
... for example you may wish to have your database stored on slower storage than your logs in your MySQL cluster
... for example, you may wish to have your database stored on slower storage than your logs in your MySQL cluster
Sentence should change @ Line 5: 1.4.2. SUSE Linux Enterprise Server
User who prefer a command line install may simply issue the following command to get the newest DRBD and LVM version:
Users who prefer command-line install may simply issue the following command to get the newest DRBD and LVM versions:
should be 3rd party in place of 3rd parties @ caution sign : 1.4.3. CentOS
This requires an external repository to be configured, either LINBIT’s or a 3rd parties.
This requires an external repository to be configured, either LINBIT’s or a 3rd party.
should be manual in place of manually @ Paragraph 3 or Line 10 : 1.5. Upgrading
... it is recommended to do a manually backup of your current database to have a restore point.
... it is recommended to do a manual backup of your current database to have a restore point.
should be your in place of you @ Paragraph 4 or Line 12 : 1.5. Upgrading
... linstor-client package on you controller host and restart the linstor-controller,
... linstor-client package on your controller host and restart the linstor-controller,
should be up-to-date in place of up to date @ Paragraph 3 : 1.6. Containers
An up to date list of available images with versions can be retrieved by opening http://drbd.io/ ...
An up-to-date list of available images with versions can be retrieved by opening http://drbd.io/ ...
should be command-line in place of command line @ 1.8. Using the LINSTOR client
Whenever you run the LINSTOR command line client ...
Whenever you run the LINSTOR command-line client ...
As shown, this can be specified as a command line option, ...
As shown, this can be specified as a command-line option, ...
Add , to Alternatively @ Paragraph 3 : 1.8. Using the LINSTOR client
... Alternatively you can create the /etc/linstor/linstor-client.conf file and populate it like below.
... Alternatively, you can create the /etc/linstor/linstor-client.conf file and populate it like below.
should be parameter in place of parameter , @ Paragraph 2 Line 2 : 1.13. Creating and deploying resources/volumes
You have to provide this parameter , because resources can have multiple ...
You have to provide this parameter because resources can have multiple ...
should be that, in place of of that @ caution sign : 1.13. Creating and deploying resources/volumes
Despite of that the size can be increased even with a deployed resource.
Despite that, the size can be increased even with a deployed resource.
should be just space instead of spaced @ Paragraph 3 bullet 2 : 1.13.2. Autoplace
MinReservedSpace: Unlike the “MaxFreeSpace”, this strategy considers the reserved spaced.
MinReservedSpace: Unlike the “MaxFreeSpace”, this strategy considers the reserved space.
should be pool's instead of pools @ Paragraph 3 bullet 2 Line 3 : 1.13.2. Autoplace
The sum of reserved spaces might exceed the storage pools capacity, which is as overprovisioning.
The sum of reserved spaces might exceed the storage pool's capacity, which is as overprovisioning.
Add , to Finally@ Paragraph 5 : 1.13.2. Autoplace
Finally LINSTOR tries to find the best matching group of storage pools meeting all requirements.
Finally, LINSTOR tries to find the best matching group of storage pools meeting all requirements.
should be auto-placement instead of autoplacement @ Paragraph 5 Line 2 : 1.13.2. Autoplace
This step also considers other autoplacement restrictions as --replicas-on-same, --replicas-on-different and others.
This step also considers other auto-placement restrictions as --replicas-on-same, --replicas-on-different and others.
should be such as in place of as @ Paragraph 5 Line 2 : 1.13.2. Autoplace
This step also considers other auto-placement restrictions as --replicas-on-same, --replicas-on-different and others.
This step also considers other auto-placement restrictions such as --replicas-on-same, --replicas-on-different and others..