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Data Intro for Archivists
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grammatical/punctuation edits, completed sentence #22

Closed ch3080 closed 2 years ago

ch3080 commented 4 years ago

At line 49, the paragraph ended with a sentence that cut itself off: "Preferable are standards that have been " (sic). I changed this to the sentence: "It is preferable to use standards that signify heading levels, as these standards are not only machine-readable, but also translate easily across web browsers and potential future content migrations." I am not sure whether it is prudent to mention HTML or CSS standards by name, but I think I approximated the intent of the original sentence as best as I was able. I also added some necessary commas where they were missing from a number of compound-complex sentences, in order to improve readability.

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doingarchives commented 2 years ago

@ch3080 Thanks for this. I'll work on a PR to address the observations.