LoneGazebo
commented
5 years ago Thx. Someone else a long time ago wrote most of these, never checked over them.
Closed RecursiveStar closed 5 years ago
LoneGazebo
commented
5 years ago Thx. Someone else a long time ago wrote most of these, never checked over them.
_1. Mod version (i.e Date - 4/23): 3/28 Beta
_2. Mod list (if using Vox Populi only, leave blank): None (found by looking through the repository code)
_3. Error description:
Community-Patch-DLL/Community Patch/Core Files/Text/CoreText_en_US.xml
TXT_KEY_DIPLO_NO_CLEAR_WINNER_TT Cannot add to non-surrendering party in Peace Deal
Typo: Missing period. A period is present in TXT_KEY_DIPLO_NOT_BANK_TT_ONE_LINE, so I assumed this was an oversight rather than a deliberate choice.
TXT_KEY_VOTE_COMMITMENT_REQUEST_2 The upcoming World Congress session is very important to me. I would like to see this resolution passed, and I need your help. Does this offer seem suitable?
Issue: This actually isn't a typo, but the text assumes that the AI wants you to pass a resolution. What if it's asking for a Nay vote?
TXT_KEY_GENERIC_BLOCK_ANNOUNCE_CULTURE_1 Your culture washes over the earth light a carless child, tossing aside anything that does not suit your fancy. Your influence will wane soon enough.
Typos: light -> like carless -> careless
TXT_KEY_GENERIC_ATTACKED_WEAK_WARMONGER_1 We may lack your military strength, however I would rather die a noble death than be a bloody tyrant like you.
Typo: Should be a semicolon before "however" and a comma after it, since it's being used to form a compound sentence. I'm such a nerd. :b
TXT_KEY_BULLIED_PROTECTED_CITY_STATE_3 Your war against {@1_MinorCivName} is unacceptable. They are under my protection, and I will not tolerate such defiance.
Issue: Text key seems to be for bullying, yet the text is for an attack. Possible error?
TXT_KEY_GENERIC_RESPONSE_SHARE_INTRIGUE_ARMY_SNEAK_ATTACK_KNOWN_CITY_2 I recently learned that {1_PlayerName} has an army headed towards your city of {2_CityName}. Consider this warning a favor, one that I hope you one day return.
Typo: Not exactly a typo...but a "will" between "you" and "one day" would make this flow more smoothly.
TXT_KEY_GENERIC_SWITCHED_TO_AUTOCRACY_2 The new world order of Autocracy is force that cannot be denied. Your decision to join our cause was inevitable, and will lead to a great and triumphant future.
Typo: Should be "a" between "is" and "force".
TXT_KEY_LEADER_RAMESSES_GREETING_POLITE_HELLO_2 The Lord the Nile speaks with you. What do you say in return?
Typo: Should be an "of" between "Lord" and "the Nile".
TXT_KEY_LEADER_HARUN_GREETING_NEUTRAL_HELLO_2 Welcome to Arabia, I do hope the sands were not too harsh for you.
Typo: Comma should be a semicolon, since it's two independent clauses. Nitpicking, but still...
TXT_KEY_LEADER_BISMARCK_GREETING_NEUTRAL_HELLO_2 As Chancellor, I am formally and legally required to welcome you to Germany. So welcome.
Typo: Should be a comma between "So" and "welcome". Nitpicking, but still...(x2)
TXT_KEY_LEADER_ALEXANDER_GREETING_HOSTILE_HELLO_2 Tremble before the might armies of Greece, fiend.
Typo: might -> mighty
TXT_KEY_WASHINGTON_EXPANSION_SERIOUS_WARNING_2 I will not warn you again: you are settling in lands claimed by the United State of America.
Typo: State -> States
TXT_KEY_GENERIC_INSULT_CULTURE_3 You are barbaric and crude. Shall I send one my artists over to show you what real culture looks like?
Typo: Should be an "of" between "one" and "my artists".
TXT_KEY_RESPONSE_DENOUNCE_HUMAN_BELIEVES_ORDER_1 I know that you are trying to cause a worker's revolution in my lands. For my nation's stability and yours, cease this envangelizing of Order at once.
Typo: envangelizing -> evangelizing
TXT_KEY_LEADER_ATTILA_TRADE_CANT_MATCH I would offer more, but I've spent to much time talking and not enough time pillaging. Is this acceptable?
Typo: to -> too
TXT_KEY_GENERIC_TRADE_CANT_MATCH_NEGATIVE_3 What makes you think we would match you offer, even if we could? This is what we will offer you.
Typo: you -> your
TXT_KEY_GENERIC_TRADE_CANT_MATCH_NEGATIVE_4 An impossible offer that we cannot hope to match. You are simply embarassing yourself, especially if you accept this trade.
Typo: embarassing -> embarrassing
Hope these findings are of use.