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What is WordPress MS? #45

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Article Title: What is WordPress MS?

Article Description/Summary: A basic introductory tutorial on WordPress MS. 
Explain what it is, offer some history of the development from WordPress MU, 
mention how it is used on WordPress.com, and showcase sites using it, and how 
they use it. 

A mention of BuddyPress, the WordPress Plugin that adds a social layer to 
self-hosted sites, working best for multisites, is highly recommended.

Donncha O'Caoimh is a friend of the instructor, and the lead developer of WPMS, 
if you would like to interview him or get quotes about developing it.

Skill Level: Advanced Beginner to Intermediate - should be familiar with WPMS 
or willing to dive deeply into the subject.

Skills: WordPress, Research, Writing, Graphics, WordPress
Themes, WordPress Plugins, WordPress MS

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Original comment by M.VE...@students.clark.edu on 30 May 2014 at 2:39

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Original comment by M.VE...@students.clark.edu on 4 Jun 2014 at 6:20

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Great topic and layout of the article. Below are my suggestions regarding only 
the photos at this time. 

Photos: Make all photos the large setting size and set to the left; 
additionally, make sure they are inserted either at the beginning or ending of 
a paragraph. I mention this because currently your photos are placed right in 
the center of your paragraph. See images attached as an example of what your 
code looks like and should like. :-) Let me know if you have any questions. 

Please feel free to design, if you do not like the way the larger images 
appear, use the smaller images but use the image settings to set the alignment 
vs moving the photo in the HTML frame into the middle of your paragraph. 

Please work on fixing these quick fixes while I further review the rest of the 
article. 

GREAT WORK!!

Original comment by s.billmyre@students.clark.edu on 4 Jun 2014 at 8:02

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Original comment by M.VE...@students.clark.edu on 7 Jun 2014 at 7:45

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Paragraph 1: 
[My concerns with the first paragraph, is when I went to start researching this 
topic to offer review, the first source I arrived to on google was a particular 
blog. It appears that a lot of the same verbiage is being taken and slightly 
modified as your own in this article. I may be a little off base but I really 
want to see you try and relay this information in your own words without 
confusing the reader with fluff and miss-used words.] See attachment for more 
information.

Suggestions for paragraph 1: 
1) Add links to sources in the paragraph when using data from someone else or 
to link to relative information to back up your own words. 
2) If you want to use the abbreviation of WordPress Multisite (WordPress MS) 
then it should reflect this format. Please change the intro line. 
3) Remove fluff words and phrases like: of course, their own, surprisingly, 
configuration change (- configuration and change mean the same thing and are 
confusing when used together.)
4) Use your own words- What does the quotations on “mode” represent when 
you use it with quotations? 
5) Determine who your audience is. 

Paragraph 2:
[Shorten heading by removing ‘the’, avoid using punctuation in headings, 
use caps accordingly.]

Suggestions for paragraph 2: 
1. Please state what you are talking about in the opening sentence and avoid 
using adjectives without a proper noun or pronoun first introduced. Example: 
History has it that the configuration setting now known as WordPress Multisite 
used to be referred to as WordPress Multiuser.
2. Main WordPress branch… What’s that? Avoid making up names and use actual 
names. 
3. Make sure names are used correctly. I believe the correct way to spell 
Multiuser is like this and Multisite; no spaces. Please correct throughout
4. Consider reading Intro to WordPress and WordPress multisite for more 
information and to narrow this entire section to focus only on Multisite and 
less Multiuser. This will help answer the title, “What is WordPress MS”.
5. Add links to sources only if you are using their words or if you want to 
like to relevant information. Please add a relative link. 

Paragraph 3
[WordPress Multisite is not used on wordpress.com. WordPress MS actually 
requires a self-hosted network. Please explain this. A perfect example of 
WordPress Multisite is WordPress.com. Please consider reviewing your data and 
ask questions if you are unsure.] 

Suggestions for Paragraph 3:
1. Change title heading. Suggestion: WordPess.com is WordPress MS. 
Did you know? Every time a person goes to WordPress.com and creates a new site, 
the site represents an additional sub site of the main distributor, 
WordPress.com. Each new site can operate as it needs too with complete 
capabilities that are controlled by settings of the Super Admin. 
2. Exclude last sentence or make it a complete thought. 

Paragraph 4
1. Reference your information in the article by adding links to source.
2. Use caps correctly in headings.

Paragraph 5 
1. Explain child theme and main framework so that anyone can understand.
2. Their own can be changed to ‘a’ and make perfect sense. 

Paragraph 6
1. Who says best buy is the largest electronic store?
2. ‘power over’ and empowering are too similar in the same sentence. 
Consider revising these words.

Paragraph 7
References are necessary as long as you have sited them correctly throughout 
the article. The examples are good examples, be sure to source back to the 
original source in the paragraph if it is not your original idea. 

SEE ATTACHMENT FOR additional NOTES AND LINKS to more INFORMATION. 

Please let me know if I can help any further. 

Thank you kindly. 
Stephanie Billmyre
971-277-0601

Original comment by s.billmyre@students.clark.edu on 9 Jun 2014 at 5:39

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Original comment by s.billmyre@students.clark.edu on 10 Jun 2014 at 7:19