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Original comment by l.hika...@gmail.com
on 25 Feb 2014 at 4:07
http://clarkwp.wordpress.com/?p=3258&preview=true
Original comment by l.hika...@gmail.com
on 27 Feb 2014 at 4:21
HI There. Lot's of great information in your article. I do have a few
suggestions. One is that some of the links do go to an error page, so preview
and see which ones need fixed there are 2 or 3 I just don't remember which they
are. While you are in there check your alt text, is it filled out in complete
sentence formate? ( It might be but you were working in there and I could not
check so just confirm this) Next add a more. Also if you can chunk it down
for example add headlines that evoke the readers interest to continue reading
and maybe turn the section that talks about the three key people into a bullet
list makes easy for eyes since with this much info it will cause this section
to stand out and draw eyes through to it. That's it from me I will let other
editors know I have looked at it and have them take a peek see. Thanks! jO
Original comment by jojogrlw...@gmail.com
on 3 Mar 2014 at 2:32
HI There. Lot's of great information in your article. I do have a few
suggestions. One is that some of the links do go to an error page, so preview
and see which ones need fixed there are 2 or 3 I just don't remember which they
are. While you are in there check your alt text, is it filled out in complete
sentence formate? ( It might be but you were working in there and I could not
check so just confirm this) Next add a more. Also if you can chunk it down
for example add headlines that evoke the readers interest to continue reading
and maybe turn the section that talks about the three key people into a bullet
list makes easy for eyes since with this much info it will cause this section
to stand out and draw eyes through to it. That's it from me I will let other
editors know I have looked at it and have them take a peek see. Thanks! jO
Original comment by jojogrlw...@gmail.com
on 3 Mar 2014 at 2:32
Thank you! Changes made. Larry
Original comment by l.hika...@gmail.com
on 3 Mar 2014 at 4:29
Checked for G/P/S. Looks good to me!
Original comment by kldesem...@gmail.com
on 3 Mar 2014 at 5:29
Ok Larry, the corrections look great. A few more requests;
1) add the "more" command in there somewhere up towards the top of the article
2) Could you break down the very last paragraph at all? Don't do if you can
not find a spot that would makes sense but see if there is a natural break
point, it doesn't have to have another heading just another paragraph.
3) Two places you quoted something from "Wasp" Need to set it apart from your
paragraph like using block quote and link back to where the quote came from.
After you do that Hit publish and pat yourself on the back!! =0)
Original comment by jojogrlw...@gmail.com
on 4 Mar 2014 at 2:45
Original comment by lorelle...@gmail.com
on 19 Apr 2014 at 7:44
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lorelle...@gmail.com
on 31 Dec 2013 at 5:22