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Aesthetic Programming 2017 AU
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Feedback on MiniEx 4 by Winnie Soon #7

Open siusoon opened 7 years ago

siusoon commented 7 years ago

In terms of code, you have a generally good understanding on when and how to use objects and arrays at a sophisticated level. I can see that you have a step by step procedure in your mind in thinking about object properties and their behaviors (as expressed in functions). btw, are you missing another pop() in your code? You have used random color for your sketch, I wonder how do you see the aesthetics of randomness? What is random? How does it help us to understand your work with the random feature?

In terms of your conceptual part, I like the way how you relate cybernetics to organic/biological systems in the nonhuman world. At least it seems that the project helps us to think of something beyond the only technical system and to consider other things like "self-sustaining" and the logic of "resetting" life. If I have to push you a bit further on this, I will ask: how would you improve your program such that it becomes more than a demonstration? And how it may have changed to consider your work as an artwork/critical design work?