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Evolution of Ecological Networks. This is Matt Lau's dissertation projects folder. For more info, please contact him.
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Make Sendai chapter the comprehensive literature review #132

Closed MKLau closed 10 years ago

MKLau commented 10 years ago

Hi Matt, I had a chance to look at your dissertation. There are a few issues you should address:

  1. Please refer to the format guidelines for Journal Format Dissertations on our website: http://www2.nau.edu/gradcol/ThesesDiss/JournalFormat.pdf
  2. Your first chapter is essentially a picture of your article. Please redo that chapter and use the format that you used when you submitted it to the journal that published it.
  3. The Overall Introduction, Comprehensive Literature Review, Comprehensive Discussion of Methods and Materials are missing. It can’t just be three articles put together. Rather, there needs to be some sort of text and discussion as to how these articles are related, establishing a fundamental theme, and/or how the chapters all relate to the theme. The comprehensive literature review should also touch on all three articles. Overall, there needs to be something that ties it all together – these points are all addressed in the guidelines.

Please let me know if you need anything else.

All the Best,

Dr. John Masserini Associate Dean & Associate Professor Graduate College

Northern Arizona University Box 4125 Flagstaff, AZ 86011 928/523-6728