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Foundations of Python Programming: Functions First
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Recommended Grammar Corrections for Section 4.4 (Function Parameters) #43

Open CodeIsBrokeYo opened 2 months ago

CodeIsBrokeYo commented 2 months ago

The following paragraphs could be made clearer with the accompanying bolded corrections:

Paragraph https://runestone.academy/ns/books/published/gvsu_cis500_w24/functions_function-parameters.html#functions_function-parameters-3: "With parameters, functions are even more powerful, because they allow us to generalize a function’s actions so that it can do the same thing on each invocation, but with different starting values. With parameters our functions becomes adjustable tools that can be reused [corrected from "resused"] to solve different problems."

Paragraph https://runestone.academy/ns/books/published/gvsu_cis500_w24/functions_function-parameters.html#functions_function-parameters-15: "When it got to Step 7, for the second invocation of the function, s [changed from "who," which is used in the following code example] was bound to 'Jackie'."