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Assignment 6. Production of messages for the web 2018

https://msgw2018.gitbook.io/a6/

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Revision by @carlagob #21

Closed mirenbz closed 6 years ago

mirenbz commented 6 years ago

carlagob commented 6 years ago

Hi! I would include more visual elements to make the page easier to read. So far I've added more text and sections, as well as links and media, such as emojis, links to YouTube videos and images.

Apart from that, the work is really good! There were very little spelling and grammar mistakes. And the information was right and clear.

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carlagob commented 6 years ago

I have made some changes on the "E-government" page:

Textual additions: introduction, what is it's main objective, it's benefits, and the role that TICs play.
I added sections with titles written in bold.
I added a link of a YouTube video and an image, one link and one emoji.
I've changed some part of the text.

@MSGW2018/group5 @mberasategi #21

carlagob commented 6 years ago

I have made some changes on the "Hacktivism" page:

Textual additions: I added different sections (Is hacktivism good or bad?, Hacktivism or cyberterrorism?, What are the most common targets for hacktivists?, and examples).
I added titles written in bold.
I added a link of a YouTube video and emojis.
I've changed some part of the text.
I added eight other links.

@MSGW2018/group5 @mberasategi #21

carlagob commented 6 years ago

I have made some changes on the "Open Government" page:

Textual additions: I added different sections (What is an Open Government?, Open Government services, Technology and Open Government, and Different initiatives).
I added titles written in bold.
I added a link of a YouTube video, an image and one emoji.
I've changed some part of the text.
I added five other links.

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carlagob commented 6 years ago

Overall there were very little spelling mistakes and the information was correct. :thumbsup:

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mirenbz commented 6 years ago

Hi @carlagob , good to see you back :relaxed: . If you have finished all the revisions assigned to you please go ahead and open a pull request as described in the CONTRIBUTING document.