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Closed hananezlitni closed 5 years ago

hananezlitni commented 5 years ago

In the introduction (above section 3):

I believe it would be better to provide a description of the document content (mention what each section talks about)
I think that the paragraph “There are several standards …” (line 2) till the end is more appropriate in the “objectives” section (where you define the qualities/characteristics), because when I read it, it sounded too specific and the introduction should be abstract.

Malavika-Srinivasan commented 5 years ago

Thanks @hananezlitni. Closing this issue.

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Malavika-Srinivasan commented 5 years ago

44299db - Latest edit in regards to this issue