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[PD] Writing an email for an internship #5

Open MarcusZagorski opened 1 year ago

MarcusZagorski commented 1 year ago

From Module-JS1 created by esma-g: CodeYourFuture/Module-JS1#33

Coursework content

Draft an email to apply for an internship at a fictional company called Vonda. Make sure to include the five things below:

  1. Why you want to become a software developer
  2. Your background and your past
  3. What you are doing at the moment
  4. Where you see yourself in the future
  5. Why Vonda should give you the opportunity to do an internship

The email should be formatted in a way that is ready to be sent. Make sure you include a subject title and pay attention to the formatting (font type and size, alignment etc).

Estimated time in hours

1

What is the purpose of this assignment?

This assignment aims to improve your writing skills.

How to submit

Share the link to the Google doc on the ticket on your coursework board.

MarcusZagorski commented 1 year ago

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1nEvhx31vpQEVqteftsjSyqRGZMYpLx3tKUoKVNvtChs/edit?usp=sharing

kfklein15 commented 1 year ago

This is a great e-mail, and you clearly state the necessary items. I would have done the following:

  1. Checked it with a grammar tool - accepted all changes, so you could see the difference it could have made :) You can reject them all, obviously.
  2. Reduced the length by half, so that it can read without having to scroll down AI checker: 69%