General language improvements

[plamarque]

general language improvements

• grammar correctness
• avoid passive voice
• typos
• avoid repetitions and redundancy
• shorten sentences where possible.
• punctuation
• keep a neutral tone
• target a knowledgeable audience
• remain informative

[plamarque]

Too much repetition of the Word "The needs" It can be written as the relationship between Meeds Association and Meeds DAO.....

Thanks for the feedback, working on reducing repetitions of proper names such as Meeds Association, WoM, Hub, etc.

[Pandypassion]

Clarity and consistency, you may want to consider capitalizing "Deed" to match the capitalization of the other verbs in the sentence, and you can also add a comma after "SELL" for better readability.

[Zacharial]

The term "globally" is replaced with "worldwide," which maintains the intended meaning while reducing wordiness.

[ChristianaEt0k]

The text contains some repetition and redundancy that could be streamlined for conciseness. For example, the phrase "serve a similar purpose to deeds in the physical world" and "confirming tangible property ownership" convey similar ideas and could be combined or rephrased to avoid redundancy.

[Maureenteddy]

The future of this project is amazing