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Clarifing the goal of cities in the World of Meeds #353

Closed Udoema4 closed 6 months ago

Udoema4 commented 6 months ago

In the World of Meeds ecosystem, the goal of Cities (Deeds NFTs) is to serve as virtual representations of real-world cities, each encapsulating unique attributes and characteristics of their respective urban environments. These Deeds NFTs aim to foster community engagement, promote sustainable practices, and facilitate economic development within their virtual realms. Through decentralized ownership and governance, Cities empower participants to shape the evolution of their digital counterparts, fostering innovation, collaboration, and cultural exchange on a global scale.

Frankiblac commented 6 months ago

Overall Impression: Great effort on clarifying the goal of cities in response to issue #182. This is key for our whitepaper’s clarity.

Feedback:

•   Clarity: The section on decentralized governance could be clearer with examples.
•   Accuracy: The statements align well with our goals; consider referencing supporting studies.

Suggestions:

•   Add a real-world example of a city that demonstrates our decentralized governance goals.
•   Simplify complex sentences for better readability, especially in the third paragraph.

Conclusion: This PR significantly improves our documentation. A few minor adjustments and examples will make it perfect for merging. Great work!

Abuteslimah99 commented 6 months ago

Pull Request Review:

Positive Aspects: 1.Clarity of Concept:The introduction provides a clear and concise description of the concept of "Cities" within the Work of Meeds (WoM). The analogy with real estate in the digital world is a thoughtful way to convey the idea.

  1. Logical Structure: The points outlined for explanation follow a logical progression, offering a comprehensive understanding of the concept. Starting with how cities are built to their role in enabling community cooperation and self-governance.

  2. Inclusion of Key Characteristics: The PR appropriately highlights essential characteristics, such as the progressive building of cities with minting deeds, their role in fostering community collaboration, and their self-governance abilities.

    Suggestions for Improvement:

  3. Expand on "Extra Services": The point about cities offering extra services could benefit from a bit more detail. Providing examples or briefly elaborating on the nature of these services would enhance the comprehensiveness of the explanation.

  4. Visual Aids: Consider adding visual aids like diagrams or illustrations to help visually represent the concept of cities, especially regarding their progressive building and self-governance. Visuals can enhance understanding, particularly for those who are more visually inclined.

  5. Grammar Check: Double-check the grammar and wording for clarity. For instance, the phrase "This PR must to explain" could be refined to "This PR aims to explain."

  6. Consistent Terminology: Ensure consistent use of terminology. If "Cities" is the term chosen for this concept, maintain its use throughout the explanation for clarity and consistency.

Overall, this pull request is a solid foundation for explaining the concept of "Cities" in the WoM. A bit more detail on extra services, visual aids, and attention to grammar will further strengthen the explanation. Great work! 🚀