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Needs english language editing #118182

Open hbuckingham-hl opened 6 months ago

hbuckingham-hl commented 6 months ago

The quality of the documentation is good at the beginning, but needs editing in the latter portion. The english become a bit unpolished, but the final sections are also somewhat confusing. Where do you run those commands. Are they part of a larger file? Are they commands that my CI/CD pipeline should run? Is all of this dependent on me issuing commands from my laptop (I doubt that last one is the case, but you should make that clear).


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navba-MSFT commented 6 months ago

@hbuckingham-hl Thanks for reaching out to us and sharing this feedback. I have assigned this issue to the content author to look into this.

likebupt commented 3 months ago

Hi @hbuckingham-hl , Thanks for your feedback. The original notebook is mentioned at the beginning of the article image If you want to run CI/CD, you may need to use AzureML CLI, and you could refer to this article