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Please review this chapter #121408

Open QueryCoordinator opened 2 months ago

QueryCoordinator commented 2 months ago

Hello,

please review this chapter: "Carefully consider when consolidating multiple activities into one file share or multiple file shares in one storage accounts. Distributing these shares onto separate storage accounts improves throughput, resiliency and simplifies the performance analysis. If many SAP SIDs and shares are consolidated onto a single Azure Files storage account and the storage account performance is poor due to hitting the throughput limits. It can become difficult to identify which SID or volume is causing the problem."

I think it should read: "Carefully consider when consolidating multiple activities into one file share or multiple file shares in one storage account. Distributing these shares onto separate storage accounts improves throughput, resiliency and simplifies the performance analysis. If many SAP SIDs and shares are consolidated onto a single Azure Files storage account and the storage account performance is poor due to hitting the throughput limits, it can become difficult to identify which SID or volume is causing the problem."

There is singular/plural issue and a punctuation issue.

Kind regards, Anne H., QC


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TPavanBalaji commented 2 months ago

@QueryCoordinator Thanks for your feedback! We will investigate and update as appropriate.

msftrobiro commented 2 months ago

Fixed by PR 271733. thanks for finding and flagging this.