Editing for piracy writing

[cerdamejiaj]

First Paragraph

• You need capital A in when you start a new sentence in At least to him
• You need space between money and which

Second Paragraph

• every day should go together and also song writer
• when you said "Concert's" did you meant Concerts ?
• in as pirating did you meant aspirating ?

Third Paragraph

• You have "It they" did you meant "If they" ? -You have all twice add "the" before time and also misspelled people after "time that"

Fourth Paragraph in the last sentence did you meant "artist's" ?

Your aritcle is overall great, its pretty detailed and well writen.

[Mitchello457]

Thank you for the feedback. I made all of the changes named except for Three. Every day will stay as two words because I could have said each day instead, as pirating will remain, and it should still be of time that people spend.