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An addon for ThaumCraft 4(made by Azanor), which adds a lot of random things.
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Grammar / Spelling fixes [1.7.10] #20

Open dirtyfargo opened 8 years ago

dirtyfargo commented 8 years ago

I was reading a few of the Thaumonomicon entries and was wondering if you by any chance wanted some of them re-written or edited to be more formal and grammatically correct.

Example: Old entry (Iron Spikes): Sometimes a thaumaturge just wants to stydy his researches. Calm, alone and without any zombies at his back. Sure, sometimes a door might just be enough. Sometimes, however, a thaumaturge may want those fools to suffer. It's a shame thaumaturgy does not offer a way of passivly killing enemies... Or does it? You have managed to create a block, that will damage everyone who steps on it. However it also tears apart items dropped by fools. There might be a way to resolve this problem... A thaumaturge may also notice, that after killing a creature the spikes get covered in blood. To wipe the blood out you need to use your Enchanted Fabric on the spikes. The fabric will get covered in blood, but it can be cleared in a crucible.

New revised entry: Sometimes a Thaumaturge just wants to study his research in peace. Calm, alone, without any zombies bothering him. This tranquility is perhaps not enough however, and you feel an overwhelming urge to watch the enemy suffer. You have managed to use your magical knowledge to transform a common metal into deadly spikes of destruction. These spikes will damage anything that stands on it, but drops from monsters are torn apart into nothingness. After brutally murdering the mob, you begin to notice that the spikes are covered in blood. Luckily you have some enchanted cloth that should be able to help clean up this mess! One might find the crucible useful to wash the fabric clean and clear the evidence.

How the new entry looks in the Thaumonomicon: https://gyazo.com/2f676ebb577971c5898c4553c994ffcb

No worries if you're not interested, just saw a few spelling mistakes and thought I would offer to help =)

Modbder commented 8 years ago

Sure, I will fix the spelling mistakes if I notice them. Since English is not my native language there are quite alot of them ;)

dirtyfargo commented 8 years ago

No worries! If you approve of the changes I made here as an example, I don't mind working on editting the lang file myself and submitting it as a PR if you wanted. If not no problem though :)