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DDLC fan mod to extend Monika
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v0.12.2 Typos #7271

Closed Retrolovania closed 3 years ago

Retrolovania commented 3 years ago

Figured this would be necessary, so I'll open this for you guys to save time.

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Necrocytus commented 3 years ago

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multimokia commented 3 years ago

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lunulae commented 3 years ago

In the floating islands dialogue (I believe this one is exclusive to clear weather?) Monika talks about sitting under the cherry blossom tree, and cherry blossom is capitalized for some reason. It's not the kind of formal name that would usually be capitalized.

lunulae commented 3 years ago

In the 3+ years variant of the "Will you marry me" dialogue, when she says "I really do love you, (nickname) and I honestly..." I think there's a missing comma after the nickname?

H2-san commented 3 years ago

Nicknames in dialogue (such as sweetie, honey, etc.) at the beginning of the dialogue aren't capitalized. Posting this here to save extra time.

Booplicate commented 3 years ago

Can you post an example of where nicknames aren't capitalized?

lunulae commented 3 years ago

I've seen it once in a Pong quip, I believe the line is just the nickname.

lunulae commented 3 years ago

In monika_science, the first line feels a bit odd in context. "Have you ever wondered if science never got accepted?" sounds like asking if science hasn't yet been. I think in the topic, it sounds a bit more like she means "Have you ever wonder what life would be like if science never got accepted?"

Booplicate commented 3 years ago

Fixed the quip, thanks.

Unsure about that sentence, I'll leave it to the others to decide. I think it works fine as is, especially in a casual atmosphere (less wordy).

Audere commented 3 years ago

Strongly disagree. The sentence just doesn't make sense, and I actually had to read it twice before realizing the intended meaning when I first saw it. The proposed alternative is casual and makes sense (although it should be "Have you ever wondered" instead of "Have you ever wonder.")

lunulae commented 3 years ago

Oh, good catch. Typo in my typo fix, lmao

H2-san commented 3 years ago

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Please see this dialog as proof that Monika's nicknames for the user (when at the beginning of a sentence) are not capitalized.

[REFERENCE: Pong 5-win streak]

Bigboibigdum commented 3 years ago

image I found this in the "Mental sickness" topic and this may be whats intended but I'm a bit confused.

multimokia commented 3 years ago

I'm not sure what's wrong in that line

Bigboibigdum commented 3 years ago

It looks like she's apologizing for wanting to learn more about her own mind but it feels weird with the "Like," and "right?" and I think it may have meant to be "Like, say I want to learn more about my own mind, right?" or something because the current line feels kinda off to me. Maybe I'm just dumb though.

multimokia commented 3 years ago

It's sarcasm

Bigboibigdum commented 3 years ago

ok

Malicos commented 3 years ago

In monika_we there is one: m 2wud "...While Aldous Huxley was even accused by both Orwell and Kurt Vonnegutof of plagiarizing its plot for his {i}Brave New World{/i}, something he constantly denied."

Should be Vonnegut, not Vonnegutof.

Ulti70895 commented 3 years ago

image I was not in there, help!

multimokia commented 3 years ago

That's an unofficial spritepack. You'll want to tell the creator of it to fix it

Ulti70895 commented 3 years ago

Aww sad, I just had an ''i'' joke there lol. Thank you.

MrVavlo commented 3 years ago

"Wouldn't a wonderful dinner be wonderful?" image

Don't know if you can count this as typo in English, but I would suggest replacing the first "wonderful" word to another synonym

KansaiGal commented 3 years ago

In eventlabel="monika_nature", "Not really.": mosquitos->mosquitoes

Ulti70895 commented 3 years ago

I believe ''Mosquitos'' is grammatically correct as far as I know about English.

Ulti70895 commented 3 years ago

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Is this a fypo?

multimokia commented 3 years ago

Looks like it

Ulti70895 commented 3 years ago

Lol, I just searched up for the lyrics of the Amaranthine song and it seems that is not a typo. image

multimokia commented 3 years ago

cursed

Ulti70895 commented 3 years ago

![Uploading image.png…]() Is ''Let's Plays'' a term or a typo? Topic: Virtual Youtuber. Edit: Uh, I guess I cannot upload the pic because something crashed lol.

Ulti70895 commented 3 years ago

image I believe Greek must be capitalized, too.

Ulti70895 commented 3 years ago

image Double ''but'' is intentional in this fun fact? And lets see if anyone missed them XD.

zwartkop2 commented 3 years ago

screenshot0038 Probably only need the second fade.

Ry2uko commented 3 years ago

image Just a small typo, I think the topic is about camping

multimokia commented 3 years ago

If you mean forgo, that's not a typo, it means something along the lines of to do without, in this case

Ry2uko commented 3 years ago

oh ok. I thought it was a typo : )


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If you mean forgo, that's not a typo, it means something along the lines of to do without, in this case

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ghost commented 3 years ago

Small typo, dandere referenced twice.

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MrVavlo commented 3 years ago

That topic is part of submod, not MAS iirc

zwartkop2 commented 3 years ago

Small typo, dandere referenced twice.

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This is part of a submod, iirc. You’ll have to get in contact with whoever made the submod.

ghost commented 3 years ago

Thanks, I've got it sorted now

Ulti70895 commented 3 years ago

image Does ''some of them'' need a verb after it?

Ulti70895 commented 3 years ago

image A line is duplicated.

ThePotatoGuy commented 3 years ago

[closing as fixed]