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In the floating islands dialogue (I believe this one is exclusive to clear weather?) Monika talks about sitting under the cherry blossom tree, and cherry blossom is capitalized for some reason. It's not the kind of formal name that would usually be capitalized.
In the 3+ years variant of the "Will you marry me" dialogue, when she says "I really do love you, (nickname) and I honestly..." I think there's a missing comma after the nickname?
Nicknames in dialogue (such as sweetie, honey, etc.) at the beginning of the dialogue aren't capitalized. Posting this here to save extra time.
Can you post an example of where nicknames aren't capitalized?
I've seen it once in a Pong quip, I believe the line is just the nickname.
In monika_science
, the first line feels a bit odd in context.
"Have you ever wondered if science never got accepted?"
sounds like asking if science hasn't yet been. I think in the topic, it sounds a bit more like she means "Have you ever wonder what life would be like if science never got accepted?"
Fixed the quip, thanks.
Unsure about that sentence, I'll leave it to the others to decide. I think it works fine as is, especially in a casual atmosphere (less wordy).
Strongly disagree. The sentence just doesn't make sense, and I actually had to read it twice before realizing the intended meaning when I first saw it. The proposed alternative is casual and makes sense (although it should be "Have you ever wondered" instead of "Have you ever wonder.")
Oh, good catch. Typo in my typo fix, lmao
Please see this dialog as proof that Monika's nicknames for the user (when at the beginning of a sentence) are not capitalized.
[REFERENCE: Pong 5-win streak]
I found this in the "Mental sickness" topic and this may be whats intended but I'm a bit confused.
I'm not sure what's wrong in that line
It looks like she's apologizing for wanting to learn more about her own mind but it feels weird with the "Like," and "right?" and I think it may have meant to be "Like, say I want to learn more about my own mind, right?" or something because the current line feels kinda off to me. Maybe I'm just dumb though.
It's sarcasm
ok
In monika_we
there is one:
m 2wud "...While Aldous Huxley was even accused by both Orwell and Kurt Vonnegutof of plagiarizing its plot for his {i}Brave New World{/i}, something he constantly denied."
Should be Vonnegut, not Vonnegutof.
I was not in there, help!
That's an unofficial spritepack. You'll want to tell the creator of it to fix it
Aww sad, I just had an ''i'' joke there lol. Thank you.
"Wouldn't a wonderful dinner be wonderful?"
Don't know if you can count this as typo in English, but I would suggest replacing the first "wonderful" word to another synonym
In eventlabel="monika_nature", "Not really.": mosquitos->mosquitoes
I believe ''Mosquitos'' is grammatically correct as far as I know about English.
Is this a fypo?
Looks like it
Lol, I just searched up for the lyrics of the Amaranthine song and it seems that is not a typo.
cursed
![Uploading image.png…]() Is ''Let's Plays'' a term or a typo? Topic: Virtual Youtuber. Edit: Uh, I guess I cannot upload the pic because something crashed lol.
I believe Greek must be capitalized, too.
Double ''but'' is intentional in this fun fact? And lets see if anyone missed them XD.
Probably only need the second fade.
Just a small typo, I think the topic is about camping
If you mean forgo, that's not a typo, it means something along the lines of to do without
, in this case
oh ok. I thought it was a typo : )
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If you mean forgo, that's not a typo, it means something along the lines of to do without, in this case
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Small typo, dandere referenced twice.
That topic is part of submod, not MAS iirc
Small typo, dandere referenced twice.
This is part of a submod, iirc. You’ll have to get in contact with whoever made the submod.
Thanks, I've got it sorted now
Does ''some of them'' need a verb after it?
A line is duplicated.
[closing as fixed]
Figured this would be necessary, so I'll open this for you guys to save time.
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