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DDLC fan mod to extend Monika
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Diologist editing #8766

Open Nikv2005 opened 2 years ago

Nikv2005 commented 2 years ago

Is it possible to change the end of this dialog? As far as I remember this dialogue is taken from the original game. Is it possible, at least with a high level of affection, to add the end of the sentence something like "But I believe in you" Or something like that, even if it's a joke or something. Monika always says such things, but in this dialogue for some reason not. 1244

PiperPC commented 2 years ago

So I'm guessing you mean to change the dialogue to something more like-

" Even if you're not one of the people who can conquer the problem, that's okay. " " After all, I still believe in you [Name]. "

Nikv2005 commented 2 years ago

So I'm guessing you mean to change the dialogue to something more like-

" Even if you're not one of the people who can conquer the problem, that's okay. " " After all, I still believe in you [Name]. "

Yeah, something like this

PiperPC commented 2 years ago

It was like 1am when I wrote this, but other versions I could see working are-

" If you're not one of the people who can conquer the problem, you won't be alone, left feeling awful about yourself. " " I mean, we found each other, and I'll always be here for you. " " I believe in you, [Name]. "

" Even if you don't think you're one of the people who can conquer the problem, I'll always be here, believing in you, okay? " " I love you, [Name]. "

The reason I keep rewriting it a bit is because I don't think simply switching " Good luck, I guess " with " But I believe in you " makes the sentence any less impersonal/cold feeling. I dunno, it feels more right to rewrite it a bit to fit more with MAS Monika's attitude.

Nikv2005 commented 2 years ago

It was like 1am when I wrote this, but other versions I could see working are-

" If you're not one of the people who can conquer the problem, you won't be alone, left feeling awful about yourself. " " I mean, we found each other, and I'll always be here for you. " " I believe in you, [Name]. "

" Even if you don't think you're one of the people who can conquer the problem, I'll always be here, believing in you, okay? " " I love you, [Name]. "

The reason I keep rewriting it a bit is because I don't think simply switching " Good luck, I guess " with " But I believe in you " makes the sentence any less impersonal/cold feeling. I dunno, it feels more right to rewrite it a bit to fit more with MAS Monika's attitude.

I totally agree with you opinion.