Closed edrushka closed 8 years ago
Here is the copy: https://public.etherpad-mozilla.org/p/mozfestcopy
Please mock up landing page with
We'll get signoff on your design before we send to Alan for implementation.
This will include:
@edrushka @sabrinang here's what I'm thinking for the home page https://redpen.io/tce99aae1e32140127
It has the updated copy, branding and changes mentioned above. Because there is more text than before, a photograph background looks too busy so I'm using the our background pattern. Let me know what you think!
@edrushka I've updated the home page copy based on the redpen comments https://redpen.io/gx8ec85042b38ea596
I'm sure there will still be some more changes so just let me know what you decide.
Awesome! Thank you so much. Would you be able to do one additional variant where you add the words "and by" back into the first line of text. So it should read: The world's leading event for -- and by -- the open internet movement. You can try italics if the em-dashes look dumb.
Em dash was weird because it's close to the line break so italics kinda works https://redpen.io/sy66b4fde211454a2d
haha! Those italics are so perky! That doesn't work as well in real life as it did in my imagination.
@Saallen @KevZawacki can you please sign off on the redpen without the italics: https://redpen.io/gx8ec85042b38ea596 I changed the CTA text at the bottom so please review. Not sure I nailed it.
@edrushka Looks good, non-italics and new CTA both
Great, all done! Here is the lastest version https://redpen.io/tce99aae1e32140127
Implementation ticket is here https://github.com/MozillaFoundation/2016.Mozillafestival.org/issues/97
Soooo prettyyyyy 🌷
Replace seated crowd shot currently on https://mozillafestival.org/ with something more active and representative of the network. It doesn't necessarily have to be a photo.
Colour should reference the neon palette from the 2016 Style Guide.