Closed hannahkane closed 7 years ago
@beccaklam Good cut! Some notes:
-For shot 1, you'll need to either cut that shot, or you could screenshot it from the NYT - ie if its clear it's an article, you could make a fair use argument.
-for the "what is ransomware you ask" quote, you could definitely use the shot of Fry if you flushed the text to the right
-Check spelling of "Ransomware" - sometimes you have an e in the shots
-the "can we panic now" gif in shot 11 needs an extra second
-throw some tunes on this thing! Lately I have been using Free Music Archive, a curated collection of good creative commons music - http://freemusicarchive.org/ - find a good instrumental track there (no singing)
Good stuff! Brett
@beccaklam I chatted with @HPaulJohnson - we think we should simplify the tips here to just the one "Update your software" tip.
We can add a 2nd screen after that with the following text, which is taken from existing software update site, which we can link to.
"Updating to the latest security software, browser, and operating system provides an important defense against viruses, malware, and other online threats."
@brettgaylor @HPaulJohnson @lovegushwa @natalieworth @hannahkane Here is the fourth cut of the Ransomware video based on the feedback above :) https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BzuBOR2VJQqUSHhEckNBWVdsLUU
Looking really good. My newbie two cents:
Another soundtrack: https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BzuBOR2VJQqUREtEM182X19oMTg
I think the two soundtracks are probably too sombre. Want to give this one a try? http://freemusicarchive.org/music/YACHT/Shangri-La_Instrumentals/02_Dystopia
Agree with Hannah's points - and the shot of Fry (actually FUTURAMA!) - you could try that in the same shot - just laid out side by side in the same frame as the "what is ransomware you ask" text
@brettgaylor @HPaulJohnson @lovegushwa @natalieworth @hannahkane Newest cut based on feedback :) Really like the soundtrack Brett, thanks! https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BzuBOR2VJQqURjVfeU1UN0FNbDg
This music seems like a better match for the tone. Like!
Re: futurama - see? I'm super not cool.
@hannahkane you are cool
Awesome, @beccaklam think this is in really great shape.
One thing I'm noticing is that the screenshots of the newspapers look a bit low rez and hard to read - any way to increaase that resolution? I think it might also help to start a little bit more zoomed in on the headline.
Other than that, I think we should start sending these around for review! Nice work :)
@brettgaylor @HPaulJohnson @lovegushwa @natalieworth @hannahkane Updated the cut with closer cropped newspaper screen shots and a more colourful screaming gif to accomodate for a more fitting poster: https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BzuBOR2VJQqUNVpJSlFOeFdUMFU
looks so good
Great work, Becca! Looks good to publish from my POV save two things:
1) I'm not sure it will work, but I wonder if you can do 2 quick zooms on the ransom screen in the 2nd shot - rather than a slow zoom in, do a fast zoom in on "your computer has been locked", pause for 2 seconds, then quickly zoom to "to unlock you are obliged to pay..." - you might have to steal a second from the shot that follows, but I think that would be ok.
2) Just make the ending consistent with whatever Natalie comes up with.
@hannahkane @brettgaylor @HPaulJohnson @natalieworth Made the edits to the ransom screens based on Brett's feedback: https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BzuBOR2VJQqUakFwUVc4OWhEYWs Feels a bit fast to me? Not sure if anyone else agrees?
@natalieworth Let me know when the tips part is finalized and I can grab the assets from the team folder (I think I can do this) to make the ending consistent.
I like the multiple zooms on the ransom screen, but I did find the second one wasn't quite enough time. Could that one be extended by a second?
@hannahkane @brettgaylor @HPaulJohnson @natalieworth I added a second to the ransom screen and cut a second from the "updating your software" explainer shot (it was 6 seconds, now it's 5). I think it feels good: https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BzuBOR2VJQqUWmVkczk4UUg1d0k
Looks right to me, too. Nice work!
@beccaklam I think the only thing that's still a bit fast for me is the quote at the beginning on ransomware. I don't have time to read it all the way through before it switches to the next slide
@HPaulJohnson - can you upload this one, please?
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