Finalize the Fox Den presentation

benrito commented 9 years ago

For MWC. @HPaulJohnson @davidascher @cecilepompei @amirad

benrito commented 9 years ago

benrito commented 9 years ago

Feedback please!

davidascher commented 9 years ago

Web journey graphic needs restyling. In general, needs a bunch of typographic work. Is that scheduled for later?

slide 15: let's not use a circle that forces the URL to be broken

Souktel logo is way too low-res.

HPaulJohnson commented 9 years ago

Overall, looks really nice.

Slide 4: Think we could have a more exciting visual representation of Webmaker and our value proposition. I will come up with an alternative image.

Slide 33: As I mentioned to you this is the $ slide. Visually I wish it was more interesting and popped a little more given it's importance.

I need to give you a new picture of myself also (as I'm way too low-res).

HPaulJohnson commented 9 years ago

Some additional feedback/notes relaying from a meeting with Pete this morning:

Slideshow theme is for FFOS. Might want to use general Mozilla theme instead. Not a huge deal.
Add your job title to slide1
Capitalize "Web" on slide 2
Start with the problem statement: Access isn't enough and current mobile ecosystem doesn't invite empowerment or participation.
Overall, reduce the number of slides if possible.
Pete also noted, that we will only be running these sessions Monday-Wednesday (no Thursday Foxden).

A few additional comments from me:

For slide 5, I'd suggest using a nice big screenshot of latest App home screen screen instead of desktop version. Alternatively, you could even use screenshot of webmaker.org/mentor; it's not perfect in that it's more mentor-focused but as a visual it's much more interesting than what you currently have and conveys digital skill building better.
I don't understand purpose of MDN slide. Might make sense in context of what you are going to be talking about but I'd like to focus/reinforce a single URL throughout this presentation and that URL should be webmaker.org/localweb

benrito commented 9 years ago

from @APLSmith

Slide 9: source should be w3techs, Ethnologue and GSMA Slide 19: Missing a trick by not listing all communities that are localising? Graphic?

edrushka commented 9 years ago

Closing as MWC is now over.

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