Closed kristinashu closed 7 years ago
@Carrie-ann could you please attach the black and white pdf of all the content so far? We know you are still working on it and things will be moving around but we would love to get a rough idea of how the content feels.
@carrie-ann has shared her progress here: https://redpen.io/p/aq3ed683d65024fc8f
Everyone is very pleased with the overall direction!
@marcwalsh is looking into print costs now (which would be the area if concern).
Booklet:
Map:
Design is looking great! There are some comments in Redpen but the key feedback so far is:
Wrapping up content in Festival Guide content #68
@sabrinang @edrushka @xmatthewx
@kristinashu With the inside yellow section for wranglers, it would be 12pp rather them 4pp due to the amount of bios we have. Just making sure we are all on the same page on size. :)
Oh yes thanks, I knew that! I've updated the comment above.
@MozExhibit in case you haven't seen it, the festival guide design direction is set. Draft version 1 coming soon. The full photo spread in particular might offer some ideas for the art guide. https://redpen.io/p/aq3ed683d65024fc8f
@Carrie-ann here's a summary of the feedback to work this weekend.
Cover/back: https://redpen.io/xgc9b9608397d613de
Timings: https://redpen.io/omb652c4b57946671b
Spaces: https://redpen.io/sf084926c327f3b0eb
Wranglers insert: https://redpen.io/sf084926c327f3b0eb
D&D: https://redpen.io/ge4cbb64deb0d2ae4f
Last page: https://redpen.io/vu283b856509ab69a4 Distribute the 3 sections of content on the last page throughout the booklet:
It's ok if you end up needing to add more pages to the booklet.
Please link to the Drive folder once you have added you're working files.
Would also be great to see how this fits in with the notebook #150 and map #91.
(cc @edrushka so you're in the loop!)
@Carrie-ann here's a folder with all the wrangler images https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B4rEOP1A0tc0YkVSeUpfVjZ0a0E We are missing 4 pics/bios and we probably won't be getting them. Please include these people's names only.
Here are all the D&D images https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B4rEOP1A0tc0YkVSeUpfVjZ0a0E
Do you need anything else?
Carrie has shared a pdf for copy edits and updated https://redpen.io/p/aq3ed683d65024fc8f: Mozilla Festival Guide V3.pdf
@edrushka will add her copy edits by Wednesday.
In the meantime, @Carrie-ann will:
My Wed. edits will include Sarah's final comments and signoff. After I edit, I'll ask Stevie and Kevin to review one final time for copy gremlins (no content changes, though). Except for adding the new D&Ds, I don't foresee major content edits. It looks really great so far!
@kristinashu Just so you guys have the correct measurements. The inside yellow booklet is 117mm (w) x 200mm (h), not B6. This is so the pages fit nicely to the grid within the guide. :)
Closing this ticket, we are now on the final round of review! And everything is looking awesome!
Based on work done in - Festival Guide Concept #69
Deadlines: