secretrobotron commented 7 years ago

IT IS TIME!!!!!!

TOC or Executive summary https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oe7LSWhrD2SHrfRuVVNT9GRk-xO9rd01d7ORncQcRc0/edit#heading=h.vctf810gfjq

lauradereynal commented 7 years ago

Writing work

[x] Bobby finishes "Chapter 1"
[x] Laura reviews "Chapter 1"
[x] Laura finishes "Chapter 2"
[x] Bobby reviews "Chapter 2"
[x] Laura writes a first pass on "Chapter 3"
[x] Bobby takes a crack at Chapter 3
[x] Bobby finalizes copy for Chapter 3
[x] Bobby finishes "The Digital Skills Observatory" section
[x] Laura reviews "The Digital Skills Observatory" section
[ ] edit the introduction with the economical framing
[x] Bobby does a pass on profiles
[x] Laura does a pass on profiles
[x] Bobby helps Luke finish infographics
[x] Laura finalizes chapter 4
[x] Bobby does a pass on chapter 4
[x] acknowledgments and thanks
[x] conclusion
[x] Betting case study included
[ ] Adoption case study
[ ] Social media case study
[ ] learning case study
[x] Digital Credit case study
[ ] Laura does a pass on all sections and adds subtitles to make things easier to read
[ ] do a pass with the dashboards and the report in // to see which ones we add
[ ] move some of the education method details to appendix
[ ] Community impact page with quotes

Check and clean:

[ ] all the footnotes and links integrated
[x] Agree on titles capitalization and style - should they all be sentences when possible?
[ ] all the comments left in the gdoc addressed
[ ] make sure we don't repeat ourselves
[ ] make sure we are sharp, short and clear
[ ] check that we have answered each research questions
[ ] clear all the paragraph styles
[ ] do a pass with the best quotes that we can add where it makes sense in the report
[x] do a pass on the mid-study report and check that we did not leave important information out
[ ] Make sure sections and titles are good and tell the right story

Medias:

[ ] photos
[ ] map of Kenya
[ ] infographics with Luke
[ ] clickable links ! I don't know if that is possible

Data/Graphs

[ ] Make a better hourly graph for Sterro conversations based on averages

secretrobotron commented 7 years ago

clickable links ! I don't know if that is possible

Maybe not! But still cool.

lauradereynal commented 7 years ago

what do we put in the appendix? If anything

JoashMango commented 7 years ago

In the Appendix, can we put the links to the questionnaires? @LauraReynal

lauradereynal commented 7 years ago

Good thinking @JoashMango we will see when we have a final draft this week.

lauradereynal commented 7 years ago

add key takeaways when necessary

lauradereynal commented 7 years ago

Why don't we send the DDD case studies to the community members for help?

lauradereynal commented 7 years ago

Maybe we should add a summary of all our research questions and an indication of where we cover the answers (eg. chapter 1, page 67 )

secretrobotron commented 7 years ago

Maybe we should add a summary of all our research questions and an indication of where we cover the answers (eg. chapter 1, page 67 )

👍 In an appendix?

lauradereynal commented 7 years ago

[ ] Add more data about DFS usage amongst participants in chapter 1
[ ] add the graphs from the comprehensive analysis

secretrobotron commented 7 years ago

[ ] Fix image links (put them in the images folder)

secretrobotron commented 7 years ago

From review with Dave:

[ ] measuring internet health compared to other countries and individuals; is there a scorecard?
[ ] make sure we connect internet health section to broader mozilla program
[x] add profiles to chapter 1
[x] "93% of people" in infographic fails to make the point
[x] soften the gambling part. it's not the top reason, nor is it a good reason. contextualize the role gambling plays in adoption.
[ ] make "why people bought smartphone" graph bigger and prettier
[ ] add paragraph about how people don't want ot feel left out, and how they're left out in society; they don't want to feel left out in the digital world; people are vulnerable, have to fight everyday; they want to feel included, not left behind. they're already disconnected; product designers should be careful not to exacerbate the problem with the growing digital divide.
[ ] if you can use whatsapp on your feature phone, why do people want to use it on a smartphone? experience on a featurephone isn't what people are seeking. no selfies, camera, images, videos, etc. the can use featurephones, but they're going to try to get smartphones anyway because of those features; they don't wan to be left behind; feature phones aren't really a choice—if you can avoid them, you will.
[x] Re-generate top URLs list for gambling; show that people use the web primarily for betting
[ ] contextualize why some women get into betting; what are their motivations? do they not want to be poor, or want to take part? something else?
[ ] gambling is a concern for people in this line of work (e.g. foundations). people use mshwari to get loans for betting. it's a big deal; people are looking for consumer protection solutions.
[x] add another profile beside "where there's a will there's a way" to illustrate the dark side of betting; e.g. Evan
[ ] lottery-based savings already exist in the US; designing systems where you always win, but there is perceived risk (i.e. same feeling as gambling)
[ ] expand on section about hardware manufacturers and what they can do to improve the smartphones that people have (improve the experience); dave's team is working on this problem: how to design a smartphone for this population? these devices aren't adopted for this audience, so if we were to design a smartphone for them tomorrow, what would it look like? "reimagine what a smartphone could look like"; "reimagine the smartphone"
[ ] add graphs about how many people had to get a new smartphone over the course of the study
[ ] point to the dashboards more frequency to show people that we have way more data
[ ] idea: using sheng as a language that can be used as a language that you can add to android?
[ ] technical language is difficult--make the point clearer; imagining a new phone, how do you avoid language that is difficult?
[ ] cost: "when it's not free, it's too expensive"
[ ] do women spend more than men in data bundles? how does their usage pattern different in terms of money? do the different behaviours they have translate financially?
[ ] don't mention Sterro in quotes without explaining
[ ] pre-installed applications: if we worked with manufacturers to pre-install DFS applications, there are problems to avoid, but it's not necessarily the case that it won't work. you can do it with the right approach and the right conditions (and training) in place, but don't assume that it will be used just because it's pre-installed.
[ ] people have trust in institutions: if it's there, it's vetted. need to teach people the critical thinking
[ ] opposite story: how they aren't exposed to how open the web is. there are few things like this in the world. intrinsic openness makes them behave strangely
[x] talk about how people "play mshwari" instead of "use". reference KFD
[x] representative depiction of the DFS products that people use; which services do people use?
[x] which ones are apps, which are SIM toolkit-based
[x] vicious cycle of the market as opposed to virtuous cycle that includes android, apps, services, etc. talk about the tension of orgs that want to make apps and the market forces. people don't know where to put themselves. people want to make apps for the future, but the market isn't ready for it. this could be a graphic, with a cool circle in it. "the market is failing". "products aren't created that use smartphone technology. when they are created, they aren't adopted."
[x] it's important to have an executive summary because you don't know the whole DFS section is coming!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[ ] use chapter 4 to have a different approach: it's about the so what. use this chapter to reflect. more than facts, recommendations. answer the thesis.

lauradereynal commented 7 years ago

Cool quotes to add

What is a hustler? person that you don’t have a specific job work for any job you get person calls you and ask if you can do a job you can be called by someone “can you fetch water?"

why don’t you have that kind of job today? why is it difficult? in order to get job, you must have money to get a job from you, i have to give you some money

about jirsort's quizz

this game is too easy for you yeah, but before, i never knew the first time, i got 4/17

and now? i normally get 16 or 17

ever used branch? i applied for a loan

did you get one? yes, for 500

how did you use it? i used it to bet

about ignoring loans comfort before: comfortable, because i never knew now: i’m stressed, because now that i borrow money i receive messages, [rambling] but i’m happy, because they give me money they message me about registering me in the RB (blacklist) [pissed about safaricom reminding him to pay them] okoa jahazi for 100; they disturbed me too much! so i just ignore the line “why do you tend to remind me i have to be when i know i’m supposed to pay!!?" so i just ignore it

Do you have electricity ? not now charge at my neighbour's for free

secretrobotron commented 7 years ago

[x] Add a community impact section about using local expertise to build skills within the community which will shape the future of healthy technology adoption for Kenya.

secretrobotron commented 7 years ago

Cool quotes to add

@LauraReynal these all came from your evernote? There's so much gold in there. I was looking for a quote from Halina as well. Anything?

about jirsort's quizz

Is this from Evans too?

lauradereynal commented 7 years ago

add quote from community member about the program's impact on them. Pick from the interviews.

secretrobotron commented 7 years ago

add quote from community member about the program's impact on them. Pick from the interviews.

really great idea.

secretrobotron commented 7 years ago

[ ] clean up all the graphs so that they're the right colour and don't have drop-down menus in them (they're too obviously screenshots right now)

lauradereynal commented 7 years ago

clean up all the graphs so that they're the right colour and don't have drop-down menus in them (they're too obviously screenshots right now)

Will move this to Beta along with all the design and media work.

secretrobotron commented 7 years ago

MozillaFoundation / digital-skills-observatory

Write Final Report- ALPHA #280

Cool quotes to add

DONE