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Draft Persona Cards (designed) #719

Closed taisdesouzalessa closed 6 years ago

taisdesouzalessa commented 7 years ago

Description: Design personas cards in a way that makes the personas easy to understand at a glance and to use.

taisdesouzalessa commented 7 years ago

Hey team,

I did a draft of the structure I think it would for the personas' cards. Please take a look and let me know what you think of the structure. A layer of refinement (adding colors, illustrations, adjusting all the spaces) will be done later on. I just wanted to put this out there as soon as possible to collect some feedback :)

https://drive.google.com/a/mozilla.com/file/d/0B3b1KWRwjxtoVjNCa3RVU2U5bXc/view?usp=sharing

  1. The information may change as we move to rounds of iterations.
  2. I feel it is a bit text heavy...I tried my best to shorten the sentences. I will need help with the copy to make it more concise and better written. I really wanted those cards be easy to digest...not sure it is still quite there yet.

@xmatthewx @hannahkane @jessevondoom @prefontaine please let me know what you think of those templates.

taisdesouzalessa commented 7 years ago

Later on, it would be cool to have a comparison poster, like this example from IBM:

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xmatthewx commented 7 years ago

This is excellent @taisdesouzalessa! Well done. Great progress.

Let's check in off Github about the best way to manage a round of wordsmithing and then feedback from others. I have a few thoughts.

This is exciting. I think I see the light at the end of the tunnel!

taisdesouzalessa commented 7 years ago

@xmatthewx sure, I would love guidance on how we could organize a round of feedback, let's connect on it. Also, we could discuss how to fill in the info of the personas we don't have info from StoryEngine. I am super excited to see progress as well!

taisdesouzalessa commented 7 years ago

In terms of illustration, I was thinking about doing something in this style (names are gender neutral so I am trying to do the same with the illustration):

Illustration updated - @flukeout helped me with a refinement in the arm..yay!

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I am currently gathering feedback from the designers in the Vancouver office in terms of the design of the cards and the illustration. I also would love to hear the thoughts of you all before I move on to the next illustrations.

taisdesouzalessa commented 7 years ago

Got feedback from designers and reiterated on "Selby, the System Changer" illustration and also on the card itself. Besides it, I designed "Indigo, the Influencer". The copy will change and I will work on final alignments once we have the final copy. For now, here is how the cards look like. I'll be working on the other illustrations and posting here as I move on. Any feedback?

https://redpen.io/qm44b7dc608f93efb8

taisdesouzalessa commented 7 years ago

Also did a quick study to see how the different colors can work together once we do posters that require personas side by side:

This is the updated version - I changed their eyes and added eyebrows...in this way they look more human and friendly...

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taisdesouzalessa commented 7 years ago

@xmatthewx @jessevondoom let me know if you have any feedback on these illustrations.

taisdesouzalessa commented 7 years ago

All the illustrations are done - they are on RedPen for feedback: https://redpen.io/p/jz5de052b28bb0c3ea

And here is the card template, I will adjust all the alignments and spacings once we have the final copy: front: https://redpen.io/ned710f0c483fa0339 back: https://redpen.io/wq55c43f9c3ec2d0c7

xmatthewx commented 6 years ago

these are so great! i think we can probably close this issue. there might be some feedback from other staff on the iconography, but we can iterate on that later.