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Improve the English in the welcome message #98

Open SchalkCloete opened 3 years ago

SchalkCloete commented 3 years ago

"with your team or as your own) for the society and our planet" should be "with your team or individually) for society and our planet"

SchalkCloete commented 3 years ago

It might also be useful to emphasize the direct benefits to users in this first sentence they will read. Maybe something like:

"MyResonance is designed to make healthy and sustainable living fun and natural. Join a challenge below to unlock these benefits for yourself and your planet!"