Update tell.a.rhyme.dialog

[KathyReid]

This was flagged by user Jos Knippen, who has been doing a lot of Dutch translations - both the 'prooving' and the ellipses instead of periods.

[forslund]

Should the .'s after "nightingale birds" be updated as well?

[penrods]

The "prooving" was intentional at the time -- the original Mimic didn't pronounce "proving" very well, so the misspelling got the pronunciation correct. Probably should have a comment about this, but I'd rather have it spoken properly, as the author worked hard on the flow.

[penrods]

Should the .'s after "nightingale birds" be updated as well?

I think the phrase "nightingale birds" is appropriate -- it is plural, not a possessive.

[forslund]

I meant the ellipsis characters.

[KathyReid]

The author has penned a poem most fine; We merely seek to syntactically refine: An ellipsis here, pronunciation there - Not to impugn such a delicate rhyme :-)

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Just to wrap a ribbon around this one - are we agreed on the following actions:

• We change the ellipsis after nightingale birds
• We leave prooving to accommodate mimic pronunciation
• The other changes we leave in place

Best, Kathy

[forslund]

Sounds good to me!

[forslund]

I'm closing this one for the time being as we're shutting down the 18.08 branch