Chapter 1: Needs both color bars and an indication of which is the on the right and which is on the left.
Chapter 2: Map needs a label. Think it’s March 2020.
Chapter 3: Needs “About the data” section and both color bars.
Chapter 6: Needs “About the data” section and both color bars.
One small late-breaking text change – remove last sentence “They also saw an increase in regional emissions over China as it emerged from COVID-19 shutdowns in late April 2020.” Also captured in the Google Doc