Closed arlin closed 8 years ago
Maybe this should just wait until we clarify the scope and conclusions. Then it will be easier to decide what to cut.
I.e. this is held up by #35
This is probably redundant now that we have tickets for all the lessons. I propose close.
yes, agreed. But we need a ticket to go through whole thing and reduce verbiage by perhaps 2K words. It is over 10K right now.
That's probably #54, then.
The sentences and paragraphs are long. This could be slimmed down 20 % without losing the substance of any paragraph.