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The NIEM Naming and Design Rules
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Repetitive wording in Section 10.9 Machine-readable annotations #45

Closed cdmgtri closed 4 years ago

cdmgtri commented 7 years ago

10.9. Machine-readable annotations

First paragraph:

XML Schema provides application information schema components to provide for automatic processing and machine-readable content for schemas, as described by [XML Schema Structures] Section 3.13.2, XML Representation of Annotation Schema Components. NIEM utilizes application information to convey information that is outside schema definition and outside human-readable text definitions. NIEM uses application information to convey high-level data model concepts and additional syntax to support the NIEM conceptual model and validation of NIEM-conformant XML instances.

2nd sentence: NIEM utilizes application information to convey ... 3rd sentence: NIEM uses application information to convey...

Would anything be lost by just dropping the second sentence?