Textual suggestions on the first paragraph of section Results and Discussion, subsection Molecular electrometer concept in experiments.
I must say that I find it somewhat problematic to have this detailed description of the molecular electrometer as the first thing in a section whose title that contains the word Results, because these are not our results, but background info. I would find it clearer to have a separate section (or a subsection in Introduction?) for this.
Textual suggestions on the first paragraph of section Results and Discussion, subsection Molecular electrometer concept in experiments.
I must say that I find it somewhat problematic to have this detailed description of the molecular electrometer as the first thing in a section whose title that contains the word Results, because these are not our results, but background info. I would find it clearer to have a separate section (or a subsection in Introduction?) for this.