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created tectia section #74

Closed elisabethpatterson closed 5 months ago

elisabethpatterson commented 6 months ago

This one's substantial.

I'd overlooked the Tectia information from the Accounts pages. On consideration, I decided to pull it out of Accounts and make a specific Tectia topic, with all the instructions and screen shots and so forth. It renders correctly and is mostly verbatims but there's a lot of text.

elisabethpatterson commented 6 months ago

"On-premise" or "on-premises"

It comes up a total of three times in the documentation, as on-premise, and nowhere as on premises. I'm going to have to ask around. Nice catch, either way.

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In source/accounts/index.rst https://github.com/NOAA-RDHPCS/noaa-rdhpcs.github.io/pull/74#discussion_r1605453812 :

MSU systems (Orion, Hercules) are accessed via SSH or OpenOnDemand. See Orion login: <https://oriondocs.rdhpcs.noaa.gov/wiki/index.php/Logging_in>_ for detailed instructions.

-Cloud RDHPCS platforms (AWS, Azure, GCP) are accessed via ParallelWorks in a web browser. Login here. <https://noaa.parallel.works/log>_ +On-Premise RDHPCS systems (Gaea, Hera, Jet, Niagara, PPAN) are accessed via SSH. See the RSA and CAC login sections for further information.

Should this be “On-premises”?

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elisabethpatterson commented 6 months ago

OK, this is done; I updated the pull request, please ping me back if I"ve left something undone?

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one, maybe two typos, otherwise lookin' good.

In source/accounts/index.rst https://github.com/NOAA-RDHPCS/noaa-rdhpcs.github.io/pull/74#discussion_r1612060958 :

@@ -306,49 +305,139 @@ This figure is an overview of the timeline and process for system access.

.. image:: /images/access1.png

-Once you have a NOAA.gov email address, you can request an RDHPCS account. -Visit the Account Information Management (AIM) website <https://aim.rdhpcs.noaa.gov>_ and request access to the RDHPCS project. Log into AIM using your NOAA email credentials, review your profile for accuracy, and request the RDHPCS project. +Once you have a NOAA.gov email address, you can request an RDHPCS account through the Account Iformation Managment system, AIM.

Information typo

In source/accounts/index.rst https://github.com/NOAA-RDHPCS/noaa-rdhpcs.github.io/pull/74#discussion_r1612061356 :

@@ -306,49 +305,139 @@ This figure is an overview of the timeline and process for system access.

.. image:: /images/access1.png

-Once you have a NOAA.gov email address, you can request an RDHPCS account. -Visit the Account Information Management (AIM) website <https://aim.rdhpcs.noaa.gov> and request access to the RDHPCS project. Log into AIM using your NOAA email credentials, review your profile for accuracy, and request the RDHPCS project. +Once you have a NOAA.gov email address, you can request an RDHPCS account through the Account Iformation Managment system, AIM. +Visit the Account Information Management (AIM) website <https://aim.rdhpcs.noaa.gov> and request access to the RDHPCS project. Log into AIM using your NOAA email credentials, review your profile for accuracy, and request the RDHPCS project.

is the trailing _ deliberate?

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underwoo commented 5 months ago

"On-premise" or "on-premises" It comes up a total of three times in the documentation, as on-premise, and nowhere as on premises. I'm going to have to ask around. Nice catch, either way.

It is on-premises -- the last "s" is silent. Source Wikipedia

While premises is Latin singular (the "s" does not denote plurality), throughout the tech industry "on-premises" is often misspelled as "on premise" or "on-premise". A premise refers to a presupposition or argument, not a location, and has nothing to do with the word "premises."

elisabethpatterson commented 5 months ago

please and thank you

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@.**** approved this pull request.

I'm sure there'll be updates to the Tectia section, but let's get it in.

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