Andrew:
It seems to do its job correctly, though it does need to be fixed up in some areas. It is very formal, the text printed robotically with capitalizations and could be difficulted to read and understand for some.
Otherwise, it is a good start.
Buddy:
It has a nice touch to it, could add a clear system so it doesn't get flooded with text. Further feedback once the assignment is done.
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Andrew: It seems to do its job correctly, though it does need to be fixed up in some areas. It is very formal, the text printed robotically with capitalizations and could be difficulted to read and understand for some. Otherwise, it is a good start.
Buddy: It has a nice touch to it, could add a clear system so it doesn't get flooded with text. Further feedback once the assignment is done.