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Avoid language that implies a linear. document-centric narative #90

Closed adamn-netapp closed 5 months ago

adamn-netapp commented 5 months ago

Page URL

https://docs.netapp.com/us-en/ontap-automation/resources/overview_categories.html

Page title

Overview of the resource categories

Summary

The lead paragraph includes the following:

.... A brief description of each of the resources is presented below ...

Th word "below" not only isn't needed, but it is borrowed from language a writer might use in a book or long-form document.

Below where?

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dmp-netapp commented 5 months ago

Thanks for your feedback. I will remove the word "below" and make a couple other minor changes.

dmp-netapp commented 5 months ago

The update is now live. Please open another issue if you feel this does not address your concerns.