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NeuronRobotics / DyIO-Kickstarter

Repository for Bluetooth DyIO Kickstarter
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Review Kickstarter page. #8

Closed sporkius closed 8 years ago

sporkius commented 9 years ago

Review the kickstarter page and modify as needed. Link is https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/722129475/574507851?token=202a889f

madhephaestus commented 9 years ago

The high-value rewards should refer to plated DyIO cases

madhephaestus commented 9 years ago

The rewards for the sensor packs and servo packs are missing

madhephaestus commented 9 years ago

Rewards for Arm and DyIO and Webcam and DyIO kits missing.

madhephaestus commented 9 years ago

"..With an intuitive software package.." should mention NR-Console by name in first paragraph

madhephaestus commented 9 years ago

Be careful about all sentences being third person plural referring to "makers", or "builders". Its repetitive, sure, but this is propaganda after all...

madhephaestus commented 9 years ago

heh, it should actually say something about google apps...

madhephaestus commented 9 years ago

THe three surgeries are not brain surgery, but the prostate brachytherapy

madhephaestus commented 9 years ago

Specs and about us are unfinished

JohnFiegel commented 9 years ago

we need to review this its shared on Google docs