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Public-facing website refresh. [Work in progress]
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More headings etc #15

Closed eallenOP closed 3 years ago

eallenOP commented 3 years ago

The text is great, but it needs bits to break it up such as headings, "find out more" links and CTA buttons etc. See https://deploy-preview-14--nzcf-dev.netlify.app/ as kind of an example.

I will also scatter images around with some of the text next to them. It's proving difficult to also allow that text to be editable in the CMS, but that's a problem for later.

reneems9 commented 3 years ago

agreed.... also the text is displaying in the middle third of the page. Is that right? i think ive attached an image.

I like where you're going with taking sentences or statements from the homepage text and adding colour/ images to them. We could do that with just about all of the paragraphs I have on that page if you want me to have a tinker with it and give each a heading?

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eallenOP commented 3 years ago

The text is supposed to display at about 800px wide but something is breaking the grid so it's gone all narrow. Only a small amount of text on the home page will be on its own hopefully, and the rest will be with an image. Text on any given page needs to be less than around 80 characters per line so as to remain readable.

reneems9 commented 3 years ago

I'll write a second version of the homepage tomorrow night (been tied up with my own team all evening) and look to group the text. It will all still be there, but i'll put it in blocks so each block can be groups with an image as you scroll down the page.

Can we also please remove the photo of the COMDT from the homepage? :)

reneems9 commented 3 years ago

Have created a second homepage text document with headings to break the page up