New-Zealand-Cadet-Forces / op-refresh

Public-facing website refresh. [Work in progress]
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Tweaks after first review #37

Closed reneems9 closed 2 years ago

reneems9 commented 2 years ago

Have had a really good dig through the site and it looks awesome! after the first full review we've got a few images that need a change (plus a couple of headers I forgot to build) and a couple of links that don't seem to work. I'll add the detail below by page

reneems9 commented 2 years ago

Navy Cadets page

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Army Cadets Page

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Air cadets page

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Officer page

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Who We are page

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Mission, Vision and Values

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Structure

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Cadet Courses

The Drone Operators Course is available to all cadets who have completed their first year of training. Its a three day weekend course that covers the theory aspects of drones, pre-flight preparations and drone flying. Cadets are taught the technical skills, rules and regulations associated with them and also get to fly and develop their skills with the drones.

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How to join

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Supporters page

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FAQ

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Homepage There are a couple of rouge links right after the first paragraph on the homepage. One is learn more about us, and the other is join us

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reneems9 commented 2 years ago

Contact us

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eallenOP commented 2 years ago

I've done some of the low hanging fruit off this list now, but other stuff is a bit more fiddly so will get to it a bit later in the week.

eallenOP commented 2 years ago

Homepage There are a couple of rouge links right after the first paragraph on the homepage. One is learn more about us, and the other is join us Screen Shot 2022-04-23 at 8 03 07 PM

Links like these are quite important to SEO so I think we need more of them. These need a bit of formatting to make them clearer calls to action (i.e. trying to make the viewer act rather than just looking). Can you please have a think about where else, particularly on the home page, we can have internal links that invite the reader to dig deeper?

eallenOP commented 2 years ago

All done! I think. @reneems9 you can close this issue if you're happy with the changes, or add more comments below if you'd like anything else changed. Same link applies for reviewing https://deploy-preview-32--nzcf-dev.netlify.app/

reneems9 commented 2 years ago

Structure

ooooo can we change the COMDT to Wing Commander Mark Henderson, RNZAF

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eallenOP commented 2 years ago

I hadn’t noticed that was hard-coded in the text! I must have pasted it in with the paragraph. I’ve replaced it with a variable so that no matter how many instances of the COMDT’s name we have on the site we only have to update it in one place and it will change everywhere. I can show you where that lives in case you need to update it (don’t worry it’s not code it’s just a config file and that’s the only thing in it).