Typos & Dialogue Changes - nsfw_topics.rpy - Githubissues

NickWildish / Mas-NSFW-Submod

A submod dedicated to bring you and Monika THAT much closer. How close you ask? Like, THIS close 🤏

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Typos & Dialogue Changes - nsfw_topics.rpy #11

Closed proxilvia closed 2 years ago

proxilvia commented 2 years ago

Fixed some typos in the 'Safe Sex' topic, mostly changing "comdom" into "condom" as well as some grammar.

Adjusted some of the dialogue about the morning after pill, as I believe Monika would be more knowledgeable about its use and purpose rather than just "another pill".

(Haven't had the chance to look at more dialogue, as I'm still playing through the mod spoiler-free. Just noticed these ones at the moment!)

NickWildish commented 2 years ago

Thankyou for fixing those for me! I'll admit I probably should have done a double-take on the grammar and spelling.

Also I appreciate the addition to the Morning After Pill, both of these changes are great.