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A reposity for my PhD thesis
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corrections Chapter 1
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[x] Page 1 In 1984 the “The… -> In 1984 “The…
[x] Cooperative -> cooperate
[x] Page 3 – In the donation game should the cost valued be negated? Do you only use 1 set of values? Interesting to try others?
[x] Page 4 – took over the population -can you clarify what this means.
[x] Depending the action -> depending on the action
[x] Table 1.1 with 13 -> with 13 participants
[x] Explain what is an ecological tournament
[ ] Page 5 – explain what you mean by optimal in the research question. Can you add some explanation to the research question?
[x] You mention 6 chapters but there are 8.
[x] Figure 1.1 – helpful to number chapters.
[x] Page 6 - Three main research questions -above there is only one?
[x] Page 7 The results add to the literature …. – this is an untidy sentence
[x] Whereas -> where
[x] Page 8 Most of chapters -> Most chapters
[x] At different chapters -> in different chapters
[x] The an open -> the open
[x] Page 9 – committed in the past? Rephrase.
[x] Page 11 Such as file -> such a file
[x] And the test -> and they test
[x] Code snippets… - not a sentence