Review from Sarah

[caldwellst]

• [x] Email title: GMA is too jargon, Global Monitoring Alert might be too long. Could shorten to monitoring alert?
• [x] Look into email preview text
• [x] Ask Lena to design a custom banner for global monitoring alerts, or look into the small version of the Centre's logo with some italicised text explaining it
• [x] Date format consistency "5 May 2023"
• [x] Refer to it as the OCHA Centre for Humanitarian Data
• [x] Alerts alerts, change that text
• [x] Change text on when alerts have or have not ended
• [x] Change text to recent alerts from ongoing alerts
• [x] Drop the map, raises too many questions
• [x] A line on methodology with a link
• [x] Refer to Leonardo as team lead
• [x] Refer the data source from the subject line
• [x] Monitor alert - displacement - date
• [x] Global Monitoring Alert
• [x] CHD with CERF have developed this global monitoring system, alerts are generated for x based on y.
• [x] Could put Alert, weekly, and date range.
• [x] Make sure it's clear what is being referenced
• [x] Clear up the text around the IDMC referencing so it's clearer

[caldwellst]

Initial comments addressed, the rest now put in Google Doc for review here. Will close once fully addressed.

[caldwellst]

Addressed in #17