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Getting a handle on container security
https://owasp.org/www-project-docker-top-10/
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grammar, wording, link fixes + one note #6

Closed gramsimamsi closed 4 years ago

gramsimamsi commented 5 years ago

tried to leave the meaning untouched and only corrected formality-related things, with one exception: I added a possible citation for threat 3, orchestration tool: https://redlock.io/blog/cryptojacking-tesla

drwetter commented 5 years ago

Hi'doin' Lukas,

thanks!

I may not always have used a grammar which is 100% in line with how it's supposed to be. However I would feel more comfortable if a native English speaker will review this PR or what I wrote in general. (I remember, you're German, too.)

Anybody out there?

Cheers, Dirk

PS: Sorry not getting back to your mail

hartwork commented 4 years ago

@gramsimamsi could you rebase this against latest master to get rid of the conflicts?

drwetter commented 4 years ago

@hartwork see my comment

hartwork commented 4 years ago

see my comment

Regarding German as a native language? That's a fair point.

drwetter commented 4 years ago

@hartwork :

1) For the content there will be changes >= late November. So a large review of the grammar doesn't make much sense atm. Later on a native English speaker needs to take this on.

2) For smaller and OBVIOUS errors and for the time being: they can go into separate PRs. Obvious error are just typos or sentences where e.g. a word is missing or a wrong word is being used. I do not discuss punctuation or sentences which aren't perfect yet. This will be a task of a native English speaker.