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The California State Template is an HTML template and sample website offered by the California Department of Technology to various other agencies and departments within the State of California. The template provides California Government entities with guidelines for how their websites should be created and developed, and allows for consistent branding and web standards for State websites. Please visit webtools.ca.gov for more information.
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About page content edits #1637

Closed nguyenalicea closed 4 months ago

nguyenalicea commented 6 months ago

Review suggested content edits in the internal Google doc

Workflow: Leads to review, suggest edits. Approval by management (K/G).

extinah commented 6 months ago

Made my suggested edits. The changes brought the sentence up to a grade 13. My edits reduced it to grade 7 (we aim for 8th or less).

nguyenalicea commented 6 months ago

Thank you, Christina!

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Made my suggested edits. The changes brought the sentence up to a grade 13. My edits reduced it to grade 7 (we aim for 8th or less).

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hamiltonryan commented 6 months ago

I made comments and suggestions.

nguyenalicea commented 6 months ago

Thank you, Ryan!

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