Review content for plain language (vs marketing)

[yesenia-gtz]

https://beta.template.webstandards.ca.gov/whats-new.html

There is emphasis on plain language ... so, why did you use so much marketing-speak?

• "Brand new content"

• "boasts of an improved user experience and enhanced wayfinding"

[extinah]

Tasks:

• [ ] Review what's new page for plain language
• [ ] make recommendations
• [ ] leads review

[darptab]

Working on content docs, evaluating through Hemingway app: https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1h-zzfZDAnr3bkGOCtQA3QNQ0zTiHiV05?usp=drive_link

[darptab]

Created spreadsheet for top 10 pages (plus the What's New page) with grade levels, HTR sentences, and linked content docs with suggested edits: https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1zbwn-DkXA0Ngzj_FlHnrMHeER0nvQsDJaWq_ux1LCD4/edit?usp=sharing

[extinah]

@artkho If you want to review @kkoryaka Ready for for your review and dev. Look at the suggestions for the changes. Thanks!

• Visual design / Color
• Get started
• Structure
• Visual design / Icons
• Patterns
• Template updates
• Get started / Download and setup
• What's new in V6

[kkoryaka]

@extinah pages are updated in dev: https://as-cdt-pub-migr-templatews-ww-p-001-dev.azurewebsites.net/template-updates.html https://as-cdt-pub-migr-templatews-ww-p-001-dev.azurewebsites.net/get-started.html https://as-cdt-pub-migr-templatews-ww-p-001-dev.azurewebsites.net/download-and-setup.html https://as-cdt-pub-migr-templatews-ww-p-001-dev.azurewebsites.net/whats-new.html https://as-cdt-pub-migr-templatews-ww-p-001-dev.azurewebsites.net/structure.html https://as-cdt-pub-migr-templatews-ww-p-001-dev.azurewebsites.net/visual-design/icons.html https://as-cdt-pub-migr-templatews-ww-p-001-dev.azurewebsites.net/patterns.html

[extinah]

@kkoryaka These look good. Approved to push. No rush. Thanks.