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Office-of-Digital-Services / cagovportal

This is the code base and project location for the www.ca.gov portal redesign starting of 2023.
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Content review: About California #109

Open darptab opened 4 months ago

darptab commented 4 months ago

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1AXOVGJMkerAsELdMdbaC_rWn7JzVSfwTIhq7Y57TyaE/edit?usp=sharing

extinah commented 4 months ago

Christina reviewed. Added some comments for maybe new content (or can wait until after go live).

artkho commented 4 months ago

@artkho reviewed - looks good as is - comments optional.

darptab commented 4 months ago

The content has been updated for review on 6/6

extinah commented 3 months ago

@kkoryaka The new section Current priorities ha s slightly updated content (gun safety and Opiods). Other content also lightly updated.

darptab commented 3 months ago

Looks good with a couple of minor edits:

  1. Please remove the "s" on this button

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  1. My bad for not removing this from the content doc, please remove "units" here: Image

  2. I noticed this added text, which is fine with me, just confirming with @extinah Image