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Office-of-Digital-Services / cagovportal

This is the code base and project location for the www.ca.gov portal redesign starting of 2023.
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Content review: Businesses #120

Open darptab opened 4 months ago

darptab commented 4 months ago

https://docs.google.com/document/d/16mAr5-E0-AYP9T6jIJHtPZoVQg4Ij7xK7WSh7u6AVdg/edit?usp=sharing

extinah commented 4 months ago

Minor suggestions.

darptab commented 3 months ago

  1. Please change the metadata sentence to: Browse California state services related to businesses.

  2. Update the intro sentence to: California offers services for your business through licensing, permitting, verification, and more.

  3. Three of the featured services texts need updating, please see content doc: Image

darptab commented 3 months ago

Looks good!