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Documentation for the Omega2 beta firmware
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2.1 Omega 2 #114

Open amsiotdeveloper opened 2 weeks ago

amsiotdeveloper commented 2 weeks ago

NOTE: _This Subtask is linked to a larger Task List_ticket #113

Task Owner:

Who owns this task and will approve the final deliverables? Lazar

Objectives & Goals:

1. How does this task relate to the value track(s)?

- All of the effort we put into improving our product lines should provide value to our customers.
- We need to be able to clearly articulate the value each improvement will provide in the following three value tracks:
    1. Development - 
    2. Deployment
    3. Production

This article provides an overview of the Omega2 module which helps users decide which one is best suited for the development needs. These are articles are targeting users early in the decision process when they are trying to figure out what module to develop with.

2. Create a short statement explaining the objectives and goals for this ticket.

The objectives of the Omega2 article is to provide provide a comprehensive overview of the options available to a new user and provide the with high level information they would use in their decision process.

Reference Material:

1. Provide hyperlinks for helpful and related information.

Please refer to outline: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1N0GZG83dOvpB2MxFTK3Ez3AGx8D9avBp6x9aHxjGCRg/edit

Deliverables or Desired Outcome:

1. What are the task owners expectations?

Date Required By:

1. When is the scope required to be completed?

remingtontr commented 2 weeks ago

Ready for initial review. I wasn't quite sure what you were looking for here, so I've included all diagrams from the Omega2 diagram PDF.

amsiotdeveloper commented 1 week ago

@remingtontr I have quite a few suggestions/comments/markups for this article. I'm sure a lot of this wording has been copied from the original documentation, but my biggest suggestion is to keep a professional tone. The original docs were for the maker space, but now our audience is more in the B2B space, which is why I'm suggesting we clean up the tone. Let's give this another revision please.

remingtontr commented 1 week ago

I've revised the article for tone and made some edits.

amsiotdeveloper commented 5 days ago

Much improved! Good work. I just found a couple small typo's - see doc for revisions notes. Please proceed with PR.

amsiotdeveloper commented 3 days ago

@remingtontr agreed - let's remove that table, and proceed with the PR